Is this is good poem?

i wrote it for my science project about scale. dont be afraid to tell the truth!

A mistake?

Why is it that something actually Big?

Sometimes looks so small?

Deep into outer space, Jupiter reigns as a massive planet

But in scale, it only fits into the palm of my hand,

Or looks like another dot in the starry night sky.

Ink in a newspaper looks simple and plain,

but comes to life under a simple microscope

A piece of hair, plain and dull, consists of dead cells,

But looks like a glowing piece of straw

The sun, like a lemon in the electric blue sky, seems to warm us in the day, but deserts

us at night

Really, we are the ones with our back to the sun

Is it a mistake, for it cannot be true? Things are not what they seem.

Is this is good poem?

Umm....uhhhhh...Honestly???

you really want the truth????

Ummm....Uhhh

ummm....

hmmmmmmmmmm

uhhh

don't quit your day job.

Look....you have a great theme...scale

work with it a little.

There are stars 10,000 times more massive than the sun.

And if the sun was the size of a basketball,well the earth would be the size of a pea.You can show scale in distance and time as well and do it creatively in poetry.

Good luck.

Is this is good poem?

It doesn't entirely resolve properly...I'm kinda hanging. Though there is some rhyming in there, that's good.

Is this is good poem?

ap poem is the way you experss your fellings about issues/things. so it if it sounded completely horriable to me then someone else would think that it was totally awesome. so if you thought it was good then it was.

i thought it was a good poem, though.

Is this is good poem?

It's good for a school project or homework.