I have this story idea and I need your advice! What do you think?

I had these story ideas for years, and I never told anyone my ideas so you guys are the first ones to hear it.

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Okay, Story one: The main character is named Angel, age 13. She has this cool and steely attitude. She doesnt have any friends, and she's not looking for any,The story starts out as her at age 11 waking up in a bedroom with no memories, period. She knows nothing of her past, she just wakes up and walks around with a blank mind. The woman named Millie found her unconcious in a forest. She can't remember anything not even her name or where shes from. Millie doesn't seem to know anything, but I think she should be significant later. Anyways, later on, She is ready to journey out on her own in search for memories.

What do you think of this one?

Idea two: If you guys play ragnarok online. I promise to make this all as original as possible. There are 3 wizards, who just graduated from 5 years from Wizard Academy(Can't think of a name).

There's the Fire Wizard Eowyn.(She's 1 (I don't know how to make her cute. Which is cuter, blue hair red eyes, or red hair green eyes.) She wears a pony tail. Okay any ways, she's suppused to be the smart girl, clever and very helpful, she's also very shy and outcastish(not a word) She's introverted. But sometimes, her intelligence can get her into trouble. She annoys people occasionally with her intelligence, like she always get the answers right! She's an Offensive magic major. She specializes in fire magic.

The Ice wizard, Felix is 21 yrs old and graduated 3 years ago, he's a certified chemist and also an alchemy major. She spends most of his time in bed readig his books, He also majors in magic history. He's has a calm, modest, and resourceful nature, and he has to be adult-like.

-He has brown hair and blue eyes.

There's also the lightning wizard named Kevin(Help me with a name here!) He's the reckless, funny, impulsive type. He's 18 years old but he acts like a 13yr old. Eoywn is always the one who scolds him when he does something wrong, and Kevin can't stand criticism. He has white hair and red eyes.

The Villians.

-the 3 Sirens Sisters- when they sing, they make men fall in love with them and make slaves(LOL). They are old ladies, but they kidnap young girls and steal their beauty. But when the sirens are done with the Men, They'll eat them.

The 7 demons. They are based on the animals of the chinese Zodiac. (I have to research that later)

Undead monsters!!!!

The quest.... When they graduate from the academy. They recieve a letter from the Priestess of Prontera and she gives them a quest. The world is about to crumble, and king lucifer will take over. In order to defeat the king, they must collect 3 chess pieces.

I'm sorry guys, I tend to be shy, and I just want your opinion on these ideas. I'm sorry if they're bad, I'm not the best writer. And I kinda tend to hold back when expressing my ideas to someone else. Anyways, I want your personal opinion, or advice if you have any.

I have this story idea and I need your advice! What do you think?

I like story one... are you writing a novel in a month?

I'm doing it too! I like the first one because it is original.

Spend some time developing it more and I bet you'll soon have an awesome shortstory/novel on your hands!

I have this story idea and I need your advice! What do you think?

Don't ever be embarassed about what your imagination does. And by the sound of it you have a very good imagination. i like the idea of the first one but it sounds a little like the Bourne Trilogy - still good though - and i like the idea of the second as well. I've never played ragnarok online so i don't know how much you've copied but it sounds like a really good idea. Go for it the only thing i will say is that i have many many many unfished stories so i would plan if i were you.

Some people say that can't plan but at least havea vague outline you know begginning, middle and end or else you will get lost and i think it is best that you keep up with these ideas.

Don't give up and i shall wait to see you Wizard story in print - i shall be buying a copy so good luck!!

- By the way a great site for names is www.babynames.com where you can search the meaning (so find a word that means lightning or something it's a great help to me)

Keep the imagination flowing!

I have this story idea and I need your advice! What do you think?

Oooo! I like story One. It sounds like it'd be full of mystery and twists, should you decide to go that path. And if/when you write the story/novel, I'd love to read it!

Blessed Be!